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My poem.. what do you guys think?
Replies: 7Last Post July 5, 2012 9:56am by Jaguar
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So you want to hear the truth?
Told in a rich throaty voice.
Breathy, uninhibited, woman.
Making you beg for more.

Love fucking lust.
Smooth and sweet;
Like hot fudge.

Licking your fingers of my taste.
Dipping and begging for more.
Begging for me.

Confusion.
Passion, strong sexual desire
Powerful.
Compelling.
hate?
Love?
Lust?
Raw.
Deep.
Longing.
Emotion.

I am primitive when it comes to love.
Naive, but my eyes never stop wondering.
My heart never stops yearning.
and I reach to you.

But it isn't you that I see.
Infact, your love is like honey.
Thick and undesirably sweet.
It chokes me when I try to breathe.

Get away!
Get away!
I want to scream.
But lonliness always wins.
and I'll hold you close anyways.


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interesting

Post edited at 10:06 pm on June 16, 2012 by voices of silence


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didn't you post this already

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Quote: from feeltheshane at 12:05 am on June 17, 2012

didn't you post this already

I posted a different one.

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youll see this in a movie n every word said worth millions and none what so ever will go to u :)

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It's okay. A few lines didn't flow evenly. But none the less well enough.

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good

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I like it. Last word should be 'anyway'.

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