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hopeful disappointment
another poem by me (:
Replies: 2Last Post April 14 1:51pm by X ffion x
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i live in a suffocating darkness
it swallows me whole
no one cares
once im in the darkness
i step into my comfort zone
a dull grey
slightly esphixiating smoke fills my lungs
ripped to shreads by humiliation
decapitated by surrounding evil
suddenly a light shows through
a miniscule hopeful second to breathe
i am then thrown into a pitch black ocean
something pulls me down
i try to break away but theres no chance
slimy tentacles tug on my helpless body
my lungs shrivel up as they fill with acid
suddenly an arm reaches out to me
pulling me into paradise
everyone disappears
a fire starts out of no where
i am alone and surrounded
i choke as i scream out
no one comes.
i am ignored
as i suffocate
i am charred in the fire
ashes tell the tale

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what more can i say.

1:47 pm on April 14, 2008 | Joined Mar. 2008 | 16 Days Active
Join to learn more about Xxtiffany tragedyxX Louisiana, United States | Straight Female | 102 Posts | 272 Points
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