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Need Help wuth a story
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Replies: 2Last Post May 12 10:48am by Periwinkle
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I want to write a very short story about how some friends wronged me...

Basically, just a description of how I imagned them previously and how physycally attractive they are.  And then explain how their "behavior and actions" turned me off completely and make me realize that they are actually very UGLY on the inside.

For example, one girl made fun of Jews and I was deeply offended.  She said something like "Yeah, thse Jewss and their big Jew noses".....and I want to write how my Jewish friend was there to help me when I needed her the most... And how the other girl was NEVER there for her.  So I want to end it something like "Yea, my big nosed Jew friend was the one who was there for me and helped me"  And also how my mean friend who said that basically has become so ugly to me that she resembles a pig nose and they can turned into farm animals.

Any ideas/suggestions??  Please help me


10:45 am on May 12, 2008 | Joined Nov. 2007 | 94 Days Active
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