I spy a spring
Wound up in a coil
A soldier perched in foreign soil
A vacuum creator
A music machine
A letter on which a mirror does lean

I spy a clip with no paper in its grasp
A clothespin alone with nothing to clasp
Five painted white dots
On a tiny green square
Some dull silver coins
One needle from a pair

I spy a muddle of things, it seems
Things that you'd only pair up in your dreams
Like a colorful, rotating merry-go-round
Where objects are scattered onto the ground


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all the days were a sun-drenched haze
while the salt spray crusted on the windowpanes...

I spy a puzzle of wits
Plastic to kill
And a needle that knits
I spy a dot and five more
And a slip of paper to help tie the score
I spy a child's doll's toy
A plastic blue creature the shape of a boy
I spy the fortune of your birth
And the threader of a needle
With words in its mirth.


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all the days were a sun-drenched haze
while the salt spray crusted on the windowpanes...

1:next to the clothespin
2:the cup
3:to the left of 'Mudbricks Australia'
4:letters in ..tion... .outh ..eek at ..s.p (next to clothespin)
5:the paperclip on the 3 soduku squares
6:wizard
7:army guy on whale
8:mirror

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If your heart were broken,
you'd be dead.

I've decided to split the points in 3 places because there were lots of great entries and giving all the points to one person wouldn't be right.
First Place, earning 1414 points: Khadgar - Of the clues I did use, a lot of them came from or were inspired by your entry.
Second Place, earning 800 points: xoxo1234 - Again, a few of my clues came from your entry.
Third  Place, earning 500 points: NoNoNora383 - Although I didn't use any of your entry in the clues I ended up using, your entries were still impressive.

Post edited at 10:49 pm on June 16, 2008 by Brookie Chookie23

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