LiveWire Network Peer Answers Peer Support Teen Forums Tech Forums College Forums 450 users online 166209 members 238 active today Advertise Here Sign In
TeenCollegeTechPhotos | Quizzes | LiveSecret | Video | Dictionary | News | FAQ
You have 1 new message.
Emergency Help
Until you sign up you can't do much. Yes, it's free.

Sign Up Now
Membername:
Password:
Already have an account?
Invite Friends
Active Members
Groups
Contests
Moderators
4 online / 32 MPM
Fresh Topics
  LiveWire / Teen Forums / Short Stories & Poetry / Viewing Topic

poems tell me what you think honestly and take this seriously
Replies: 3Last Post April 27 9:05pm by DarkAngels11
Single page for this topic Email Print Favorite
( cadetjones2011 )


Executive
Reply
"Our love"
We may fight
And stay clear out of each other's sight
But no matter what we say or do
You will always be the light
Of my heart
That causes me to say our love is a work of art

"Your heart"
Your heart is like a delicate flower
Or like a strong tower
It can be broken
Or payed by a token
Of love
Which can soar higher than any dove

"Love"
A bell is just a bell
A book is just a book  
A song is just a song
But love is a feeling that
Never gets old
And will never make you cold
Love protects
And may be complex
But just have trust
And remember to never lust
If you do you will cause your lover's heart to bust
"Words of love"
To proclaim that I love him
Is so easy to say
But I will tell him in my own special way
The way he says my name
Lets me know he is not playing games
He says the most kind and loving words and each one has their own touch
And for that he deserves so much
He will forever be in my heart
He will never leave my mind
And one day our hearts will intertwine

"true love"
I wait for you day by day
Anxious to see your loving face
Knowing when I do my heart will race
And never have the same pace
It will skip a beat
Everytime we cross the street
As you lift me to my feet
I see just why I chose you because you are sweet  
You will always be here in my mind
Until the day you come back any to find
Throughout all of the years that have passed
Our love has become stronger
And we will be able to love eachother longer

these are some poems i wrote today honestly tell me what you think and no answers about going to poetry.com or something like that i really want to know what others think of my poetry before i submit it and if you like my poems please do not steal them if i find out you did that will be unpleasant just ask me over personal messerenger if you can ue some of the same words thanks

Post edited at 8:17 pm on April 26, 2008 by cadetjones2011

-------
Christ is my strength.salvation,and my deliverer
I am saved and proud


8:14 pm on April 26, 2008 | Joined April 2008 | 69 Days Active
Join to learn more about cadetjones2011 Tennessee, United States | Straight Female | 2281 Posts | 3215 Points
Single page for this topic Email Print Favorite

Quick Reply

You are signed in as our guest.

Looking for something else?
 

  LiveWire / Teen Forums / Short Stories & Poetry / Viewing Topic