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Abstinence
Bit of personal poetry.. Might be familiar to some of you
Replies: 12Last Post April 29 7:23am by crazeybk
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It's exactly three weeks, since I've touched a drop,

No buckfast, no beer, No alcohol crap!

Mum and dad were worried about me; they said I had crossed the line,

Stop drinking your life away, you're also ruining mine!

These words weren't easy to listen to, especially after drinking a few,

Twas a sleepless night, when they finally made sense,

I do have a problem! It's true!

When a person has smoked for five or six years,

Attempting to quit usually results in tears.

For me, abstinence from alcohol,

Proved easy enough, no trouble at all.

The doctor had given me detox pills,

To take over the next three or four days.

'Avoid temptation; it's the best thing to do,'

He says, 'You'll have to alter your ways.'

The Community Team then prescribed Antabuse

I'd be violently sick if I drank,

My fear of vomit, and of hospital beds,

My fear I will have to thank.

It was my life that I had right there,

It was in my very own hands.

Should I cherish a life of sobriety?

Or give in to alcohols' demands.

The very first week of abstinence,

Saw a very small but promising change.

I'd a few extra coins in my pocket,

And trips to shops to arrange.

The second week saw myself and my da,

In the cottages of An Creaggan, outside Omagh.

Here's a health to the company of big kind hearted Pete,

The singing weekend was an excellent treat.

It's now the third week that I'm off the booze,

I'm having a go at something brand new.

I've discovered I possess a poetic streak,

Though not yet in the ranks of you know who.

My new life has finally started,

But I still have a trivial doubt.

'Years down the line, will I be as I'm now?'

This voice in my head would shout.

Or 'How long will it be,

Till I've returned to my ways

Of drinking and fighting consciously,

For as long as three or four days.

Therefore I will rely on my pen,

Jotting down notes both good and bad.

I'll live my life properly

Instead of only wishing I had.

I'm taking this opportunity,

To say thanks to a number of you.

Laura, Sean, James, Paddy and John,

Steven, Amy and Paul Hoy too.

You're the best bunch of mates,

That I've ever had

Let the good times continue,

Adios to the bad!

It's taken far too long,

For me to realise,

How close I really was,

To a certain gruesome demise.

Sean, that night in Lurgan,

At Paddy's down the Lough Road,

You were sick of seeing me incredibly drunk,

You were bloody right to explode!

You say what you think,

What you want, what you feel,

Now I know you were right,

You've helped a great deal!

Now I'll move on to Laura,

It's her I must thank.

She's vital company,

That's why I haven't drank.

If I could just keep hold of you,

While celebrating sobriety.

It'll not be long till I'm on my knee,

Asking id you want to marry me.

Moving on to James now,

Such a valuable source of support.

Supplying his opinions when needed,

While not looking his moneys worth.

Composing lines of poetry,

About every helpful person,

Will end up giving me writers' cramp,

By morning I'll require some nursing.

But there are two names engraved in my mind,

That I definitely must not fail to mention.

They gave their whole lives up for my cause,

So they must receive due attention.

Thanks mum and dad

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this hurts my eyes

brief please...

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Thats really good :)

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That is awesome.  I am so glad you did something positive for yourself!

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brief..? how do ya do that?

and thanks leanneS

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Quote: from wolverineh8ter at 2:56 pm on April 29, 2008

That is awesome. I am so glad you did something positive for yourself!

It kinda went pearshaped last saturday though.. but all back to normal again.. I think il change my sig now.. or is it true that if you're an alcoholic you're one for life?

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this is sweet, good job :)

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Quote: from OglaighSeamus at 2:58 pm on April 29, 2008

Quote: from wolverineh8ter at 2:56 pm on April 29, 2008

That is awesome.  I am so glad you did something positive for yourself!

It kinda went pearshaped last saturday though.. but all back to normal again.. I think il change my sig now.. or is it true that if you're an alcoholic you're one for life?


no you can change from being an alcoholic to not being one.
Ive saw many people change.

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Quote: from Saharah at 2:58 pm on April 29, 2008

this is sweet, good job :)

are you cates mate?

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Quote: from leanneS at 3:00 pm on April 29, 2008

Quote: from OglaighSeamus at 2:58 pm on April 29, 2008

Quote: from wolverineh8ter at 2:56 pm on April 29, 2008

That is awesome. I am so glad you did something positive for yourself!
 

 It kinda went pearshaped last saturday though.. but all back to normal again.. I think il change my sig now.. or is it true that if you're an alcoholic you're one for life?


no you can change from being an alcoholic to not being one.
Ive saw many people change.


that's not what the community addiction clinic said.. grr.. and its on my birthparents genes as well apparently! :(

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Quote: from OglaighSeamus at 8:04 am on April 29, 2008

Quote: from leanneS at 3:00 pm on April 29, 2008

Quote: from OglaighSeamus at 2:58 pm on April 29, 2008

Quote: from wolverineh8ter at 2:56 pm on April 29, 2008

That is awesome.  I am so glad you did something positive for yourself!
 

  It kinda went pearshaped last saturday though.. but all back to normal again.. I think il change my sig now.. or is it true that if you're an alcoholic you're one for life?


 

 no you can change from being an alcoholic to not being one.  
 Ive saw many people change.


that's not what the community addiction clinic said.. grr.. and its on my birthparents genes as well apparently! :(


you will always technically be an alcoholic, but it doesn't mean that you will be drinking..

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that's what I thought.. Thanks :)

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Way to go!!

thats sooooo good

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