( dougalmcflurry )
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I'm not usually one to write poetry, and certainly not to post it on here, but I wrote this today at the end of an exam waiting for time to run out, and was actually quite pleased with it.
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Her eyes on fire, His passionate call. The sheer desire, She gives her all
To him, the one who touched her heart, who bought her the sun;
A Lovers Art.
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Thats so cool. I like it.
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greatescape11
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Thats actually rather good
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AngelFxxk
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I'm surprised. Quite good ^_^
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roxxay
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pretty good. i like it.
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prsnltyquizaddict
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that was really good. sort of like something you'd say at a poetry bash. short and insightful.
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Aschidzick
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thats really really good! I'm impressed...
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( dougalmcflurry )
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Awww. Thankyou :)
Considering I didn't think I could write poetry to save my life, that's actually rather encouraging. :)
Especially considering I'm taking Creative Writing as a minor at university in the autumn.
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