should i do it? As sweat swept my face tears did as well. with a gun in one hand and a suicide note in the other i didn't know what to do. i could either take my last breath now or put the gun down. i really wanted to stop the pain i've tried it in so many ways but it only seemed to get worse. i heard to knocks on my bedroom door without a second to think BANG two bullets to the head and there i layed there on the cold floor,dead. WATCHA THINK I CAME UP WITH IT IN 5 MINUTES!!!!!!!
------- I fell the pain I feel the hurt I fell depression I live in my strength
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Eh, not bad. It's not really poetry though, it sounds more like a short story, or something
------- There's something strangely musical about noise.
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