LiveWire Network Peer Answers Peer Support Teen Forums Tech Forums College Forums 386 users online 158106 members 371 active today Advertise Here Sign In
TeenCollegeTechPhotos | Quizzes | LiveSecret | Video | Dictionary | News | FAQ
You have 1 new message.
Emergency Help
Until you sign up you can't do much. Yes, it's free.

Sign Up Now
Membername:
Password:
Already have an account?
► Invite Friends
► Active Members
► Groups
► Contests
Moderators
2 online / 35 MPM
Fresh Topics
  LiveWire / Teen Forums / Short Stories & Poetry / Viewing Topic

Beautiful
A poem by me. :)
Replies: 4 — Last Post May 5 9:41am by auschick
Single page for this topic Email Print Favorite
( Tempted )


Wealthy Hobo 		Reply
You spoke so softly to me.
Your voice sounded so true.
You told me I was beautiful.
But is she beautiful too?

Don't lie to me right now.
I'm in such a fragile state.
Too much more of this, I think I'll die.
My heart's had more than it can take.

You rekindled my soul, and also my heart.
What else was I to do?
You were everything I wanted, and more.
I secretly fell for you.

But now it doesn't matter.
You chose who you wanted to choose.
So don't you dare call me beautiful.
I bet she's beautiful too.

-------
www.myspace.com/i_heart_chucks1766

6:13 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined Feb. 2005 | 290 Days Active
Join to learn more about Tempted Arkansas, United States | Label Free Female | 1240 Posts | 4256 Points
Saharah


Technician 		Reply
this is really good. I was feeling like that. *huggies*
6:19 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined Mar. 2008 | 23 Days Active
Join to learn more about Saharah Australia | Straight Female | 149 Posts | 393 Points
SweetCatastrophe13


Dairy Product Addict 		Reply
That is a really good poem. I like how did the rhyme scheme without making the poem sound cheesy. I know how you feel.

-------
You're not alone, There is more to this I know
You can make it out, You will live to tell
6:23 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined April 2007 | 104 Days Active
Join to learn more about SweetCatastrophe13 Connecticut, United States | Female | 120 Posts | 1170 Points
belizabeth


Connoisseur 		Reply
I like the poem. beauty at it's best.

-------
belizabeth is me.
6:44 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined July 2007 | 177 Days Active
Join to learn more about belizabeth Tennessee, United States | Straight Female | 3999 Posts | 6562 Points
auschick


Soothsayer
Patron 		Reply
Yawn.

Crap.

9:41 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined Dec. 2002 | 571 Days Active
Join to learn more about auschick Australia | Label Free Female | 3838 Posts | 12424 Points
Single page for this topic Email Print Favorite

Quick Reply

You are signed in as our guest.

Looking for something else?
 

  LiveWire / Teen Forums / Short Stories & Poetry / Viewing Topic

© 2000-2008 LiveWire Peer Support Network
Custom Web Hosting | Teen Advice | Peer Support