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Hold me tightly
Replies: 5Last Post May 5 9:00am by BnM Writings
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( BnM Writings )


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Open eyes view explosions of blood circling around me
In a frozen world of tears, a war carries on
You who watch from so far a distance
Are flooding the crevices of my weary mind

I watch the battle around my slowly dying
The smell of decomposing corpses pave the roads
The red glow of blood in the morning sun
Makes me want to flee to your side

"It's a dream"

If I cannot flee from the nightmare
I will fall into eternal insanity
Though you watch me from the other side of paradise
I know we can never be together again

Years turn to centuries in mere hours
I will see you fall away, and cry bitter tears of resentment
For you...

(I will follow your shadow wherever it leads me)

Soaring through the sky burnt black with ashes
My heart is beating out a tune of melancholy misery
Even though you watch my broken form from paradise
It is a simple illusion, to imagine us together again...

I want to see you again...
I want to kiss you once more...
I want to remove this curse from my rigid shell...

NOTES



* quoted and paenthesisied parts are spoken.



8:40 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined April 2008 | 9 Days Active
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myboringlife5


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cool song. were you got it at

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my time will be for my only one

8:42 am on May 5, 2008 | Joined Feb. 2008 | 50 Days Active
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bqpceagle2005


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Very deep, I like it very much.  Alot of meaning into this poem.

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"You show me and open your heart you will feel my love
and that create that everlasting glow" - Unknown

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norside916


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wow...nice, very nice. Is it a song? Or a poem?

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I'll take your hand and let you take me away,
For I know our love is Eternal.

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misscena7


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wow that poem was ve powerful...

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i need someone hows is real i need a man not a boy!

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( BnM Writings )


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to those asking, yes they're lyrics to one of my songs.

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