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Dying
Poetry
Replies: 6 — Last Post April 9 3:37pm by whttbnnr
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( Aray )


Dairy Product Addict 		Reply
Swim into the devine sea
Let it set you free
Fill it with all your tears
Let it set you free

Dance in all the streaming light
Let it give you life
Fall through it with eyes closed tight
Let it give you life

And walk across the snowy clouds
Far away from me
Away from tears, away from bad;
And far away from me

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What goes out but normally doesn't go in?
Shit!

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trashleyy


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rlly good
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baileysababy6


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awww. that's sad, but it's really good. from one poet to another, i liked the somewhat vague use of imagery so that we have a better opportunity to create one in our head and feel the mood of it. kudos!
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afonusi


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impressive, but i can do better

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ghostatmypc666


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it is good.

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bgarr1ett


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wonderful, just wonderful
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whttbnnr


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bravo

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