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may you...
Replies: 2Last Post April 6 3:51am by tenchi1084
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may you never fall into the darkness of love for too long...as long as I find myself dwelling in.

May you never fall into the confusion of ecstacy I have traipsed into by accident for too long...

To shreds my heart rips itself into...where promises that such a love would only bring joy...I find nothing but despair...

Yet...my soul burns all to cinders the other emotions that dare stand in it's way...and cremates the logic of the mind which serves as a barrier...

I burn...I burn with such intensity to feel you inside...it hurts so good...

I am frozen in my feelings to penetrate your being...so cold I cannot control my motion to move forward...

such a forbidden love...but may our hearts entwine before they find us...illegal by many states and countries...but little must they understand of humanity and it's "flaws"...

I care not for your member, nor for mine...However, I find it interesting none the less.  The need for release...overpowering to the basic instinct...nay, it is the baser instinct...to ravage our bodies with each other, to equal zero..nothingness which is ultimate rapture...in doing so finding peace....

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Wow, a piece of badly written teenage angst disguised as a prose.

Well done and 5*s for effort.


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haha, it'd be nice if I was a teenager :P.

but I'm in my lower 20's(below 25, in other words).

thanks for the 5 though.  it's greatly appreciated.

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