I'm not good at poetry but this is something i thought up. i don't really care if anyone reads it....
You touch and hope your hand isn't sweaty You speak and hope your words come out right You smell....what is it? Ah cherry blossom You look and hope they don't realize how often You can not taste. Not yet You hear everything they say You think about them always.
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Could be a bit more detailed, but so far so good
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My only suggestion is to change the last line so that it's gramatically correcttt. Haha You think about them always should be You think of them always.
That's pretty good for being bad at poetry. =]
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