Post edited at 5:38 pm on June 25, 2008 by Anonymous

Post edited at 5:20 pm on June 25, 2008 by porcelain cinderella

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When we're taught to love everyone,to love our
enemies,what value does that place on love?

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It's pretty good for the most part but you rhyme at the end of you lines and then you stop so it doesn't really flow.

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that was intentional to show the increased stress and smooth flow with his mind