if you see the truth tell me now ill stand by you if you tell me how i need your faith to to set me straight i need your support to resist deaths bait help me now in my worst time of need so that i can sow the best kind of seed a seed of faith and love not of hate and bigotry a seed everyone needs including you and me but what i really need is your help to escape this waking dream this dream is a nightmare or so it would seem from dream to nightmare sometimes nightmare to hell one things for certain ill forever remember your voice that rivals the most beautiful bell
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------- Maybe I will never be, all the things that I want to be, Now is not the time to cry, now's the time to find out why. I think you're the same as me, we see things they'll never see. You and I are gonna live forever.
How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today? Mine is better than all y'alls.
------- Taylor636Baker strokes my beard, every damn night.
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carracer
Enlightened One
Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008
How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today? Mine is better than all y'alls.
Then post em!
------- The world is only as sweet as you make it and only as terrible as you see it
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Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008
How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today? Mine is better than all y'alls.
Then post em!
You don't want me to unleash my beautious poetry onto you, really now. You may cry torrents and laugh until your sides split with mirth. I don't want to be held responsible for that.
------- Taylor636Baker strokes my beard, every damn night.
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carracer
Enlightened One
Quote: from piertangent at 3:18 pm on June 25, 2008
Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008
How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today? Mine is better than all y'alls.
Then post em!
You don't want me to unleash my beautious poetry onto you, really now. You may cry torrents and laugh until your sides split with mirth. I don't want to be held responsible for that.
I don't believe you i believe you write poetry i just also believe you are arrogant about it to the point where is may be your own doom
------- The world is only as sweet as you make it and only as terrible as you see it
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Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008
How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today? Mine is better than all y'alls.
Then post em!
You don't want me to unleash my beautious poetry onto you, really now. You may cry torrents and laugh until your sides split with mirth. I don't want to be held responsible for that.
I don't believe you i believe you write poetry i just also believe you are arrogant about it to the point where is may be your own doom
*Sigh.*
------- Taylor636Baker strokes my beard, every damn night.
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