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seems to be a dream
Replies: 6Last Post June 25 3:26pm by piertangent
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( bongbuddy )


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if you see the truth
tell me now
ill stand by you
if you tell me how
i need your faith
to to set me straight
i need your support
to resist deaths bait
help me now
in my worst time of need
so that i can sow
the best kind of seed
a seed of faith and love
not of hate and bigotry
a seed everyone needs
including you and me
but what i really need
is your help to escape
this waking dream
this dream is a nightmare
or so it would seem
from dream to nightmare
sometimes nightmare to hell
one things for certain
ill forever remember your voice
that rivals the most beautiful bell

please rate and critique :)

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Faded Beauty Queen


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Not a fan

Post edited at 3:12 pm on June 25, 2008 by Faded Beauty Queen

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the last fish caught, only then will man realise he cannot eat money.


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piertangent

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How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today?
Mine is better than all y'alls.

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Taylor636Baker strokes my beard, every damn night.

3:11 pm on June 25, 2008 | Joined June 2008 | 71 Days Active
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carracer


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Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008

How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today?
Mine is better than all y'alls.

Then post em!

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The world is only as sweet as you make it and only as terrible as you see it


3:14 pm on June 25, 2008 | Joined Dec. 2007 | 158 Days Active
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piertangent

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Quote: from carracer at 3:14 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008

How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today?  
 Mine is better than all y'alls.

Then post em!


You don't want me to unleash my beautious poetry onto you, really now. You may cry torrents and laugh until your sides split with mirth. I don't want to be held responsible for that.

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Taylor636Baker strokes my beard, every damn night.


3:18 pm on June 25, 2008 | Joined June 2008 | 71 Days Active
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carracer


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Quote: from piertangent at 3:18 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from carracer at 3:14 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008

How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today?
  Mine is better than all y'alls.

 

 Then post em!


You don't want me to unleash my beautious poetry onto you, really now. You may cry torrents and laugh until your sides split with mirth. I don't want to be held responsible for that.



I don't believe you
i believe you write poetry
i just also believe you are arrogant about it
to the point where is may be your own doom

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The world is only as sweet as you make it and only as terrible as you see it


3:19 pm on June 25, 2008 | Joined Dec. 2007 | 158 Days Active
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piertangent

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Quote: from carracer at 3:19 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from piertangent at 3:18 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from carracer at 3:14 pm on June 25, 2008

Quote: from piertangent at 3:11 pm on June 25, 2008

How many motherfucking poetry threads are we gonna have today?    
  Mine is better than all y'alls.

  Then post em!


 

 You don't want me to unleash my beautious poetry onto you, really now. You may cry torrents and laugh until your sides split with mirth. I don't want to be held responsible for that.


 
I don't believe you
i believe you write poetry  
i just also believe you are arrogant about it
to the point where is may be your own doom


*Sigh.*

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