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What does this poem mean to you?
Replies: 5Last Post July 2, 2008 1:08pm by fullmooncurse
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( InvisibleKat )


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Poem:

Mother love me.
Because i love you.

Mother be proud of me.
As i am proud of you.

Mother forgive me.
For i forgave you.

Mother hate me.
For i disappointed you.

Mother disown me.
For i am not worthy.

But Mother don't leave me.
For i need you.

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WHERE IS MY BRAIN?


1:01 pm on July 2, 2008 | Joined: Nov. 2007 | Days Active: 17
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vegchick15


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hmmm....i guess to me the person wants to be loved but i don't want any attention from my family...just my friends

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Z o E


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the person obviously has low self esteem, and its defo nothing like me and my mum.

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there aint no party, like my nana's tea party

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sadnessness


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this poem means nothing to me, because i dont have a good relationship with my mother, so i dont experience most of these exchanges with her

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dont wonder why im not smiling, wonder why you are.

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Xanthorpe


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It means you need to give your mother a card or note with this written in it. In the hustle and bustle of everyday life, parents lose sight of the fact that sons and daughters are struggling with growing up. We all mess up and we all do great things that our parents don't notice.

Stop the merry-go-round and talk with her.


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fullmooncurse


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I don't like it

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Talk to yourself and you'll hear what you want to hear.

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