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Another one. Please read and comment
Help me get better please by saying what u specifically like
Replies: 3Last Post June 27 7:31pm by SLe3piinBeAuTii
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( drjpk )


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Even

I can see the glint in your eye
I can see the spring in your step
I can see ive fallen into your trap
I wish i couldve seen it before
God, youre such a fucking whore

Oh, its too late now
Ive fallen down heart first
To know i trusted and loved you
Makes it that much worse
I should have known
By how much yur lies have grown
But i wont sit here
And bitch and moan
Oh, oh no

Ill get even
Im leavin
And youll soon be beleivein
Its over
So over
Get over yourself
I dont need you
Wont see you
When it all comes down

You can see the tear in my eye
You can see the fear in my step
Think you can see who i am
Honey, i am not that man
Im strong to walk away

Oh, its too late now
My hearts harder, you see
To know you thought you owned me
Makes it hurt more when i leave
You shouldve known
Id figure it out in the end
But all you wanna do
Is sit and pretend
Its okay



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Someone sabutauged my account!!!!


7:15 pm on June 27, 2008 | Joined Mar. 2007 | 75 Days Active
Join to learn more about drjpk Missouri, United States | Straight Male | 586 Posts | 1376 Points
lally


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For a guy, thats pretty good. Keep workin on it, and it'll be a hit single.

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I have an avatar by Carnage44.
BE JEALOUS. xD

7:16 pm on June 27, 2008 | Joined Dec. 2007 | 121 Days Active
Join to learn more about lally Virginia, United States | Straight Female | 3757 Posts | 4752 Points
sportsfreak26


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no i am not commenting on that

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Who Cares

7:18 pm on June 27, 2008 | Joined June 2008 | 23 Days Active
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SLe3piinBeAuTii


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its sucks!


Lmao I didn't read it, dont plAn to.

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.::. ii Use To qiive A FuCc., Now ii qiive A FuCc LeSs .::.


7:31 pm on June 27, 2008 | Joined April 2008 | 60 Days Active
Join to learn more about SLe3piinBeAuTii New York, United States | Straight Female | 524 Posts | 1145 Points
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