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ARGH. please comment. i don't care what you say.
Replies: 7Last Post June 28, 2008 1:39am by BikerTeen
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( well well well )


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When you said that you grew up,
I knew immediately...
That what you really did,
was you'd grown out of me.

Because you're there in tough times,
To help me pull through.
I help you, too, but good times
Never happen with you...

Because you said you'd text me later,
But later never came!

And you left my best friend hoping,
and you left him waiting in the rain.

And, girl, you're a heartbreaker,
But you've just got no shame!

And I guess I could still be jealous,
but I guess that would be vain.

Because you say they hate you!
And say they berate you!
They all wanna date you!
Girl, nobody hates you!

There was everything, then little.
The occasional 'what's up'.
And you're changing right in front of me.
Yeah, I guess you grew up.


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mcrfool


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it's ok..

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I'm sick of following my dreams.
I'm just going to ask them where they're going and hook up with them later.

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honeybee3333

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coolness.
wat it about?

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i've lost you somewhere in forever
so let's start this all over ♥

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citigurl3

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thats sad... very good though, good ryhme!

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Marijuana: It grows naturally
on Earth; doesn't outlawing something in nature seem...unatural?

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Xhiddenartist17X


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it's eh

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ninjakittymaster


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sounds like my boyfriend if you change the genders up :/

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AnacinCross


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Using stuff like texting in poetry/music will likely only make sense to our generation. It kind of shortens the life of it.
Your decision, but it's generally better to not use those kind of references.

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meh i don't like

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