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Replies: 13Last Post July 12 6:33pm by gemstone
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Please tell me anything I can improve in these pictures. I know there is a lot to change but I need your help please =)

I have more pictures in my image basket, if you care to look at them and give me advice on them too.

Thank you!!








Post edited at 6:13 pm on July 12, 2008 by gemstone

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content - typewriters arent the most attractive features for pictures

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I think they're good, but I'm not professional so my opinions not very helpful. I do like the fifth one best though.

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The first one is no no. It's extremely blurry.

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looks pretty awesome. macro shots would look a lot better if they weren't so blurry though

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Adding DCW69 pwns all in the right or left hand corners.

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I don't like the 1st or 3rd

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I don't like any of the ones in black and white (not because they're in black and white, it's just a coincidence I guess) but the other ones look alright.

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i totally dont agree with the person who said that typewriters was a bad subject... if your using auto focus the second to last photo is purely terrible... the focus on it its shit. I can see you have played about with the saturation a bit but i like the photos, more micros maybe :)

Use the rule or 3 aswell... if the typrwriter is in the pic.. make it only go up 2/3 of the photo.. its a well known rule used in photography.

Post edited at 5:59 pm on July 12, 2008 by flanders5t6

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Composition, focus.

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Quote: from Malignant Melanoma at 10:55 am on July 13, 2008

I don't like the 1st or 3rd

Agreed.

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Okay, thank you very much.
And I had to use typewritters...
Its for a portflio project! =)

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needs angle, but nonetheless very good

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THank you

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