A buddy of mine does it and wants a little feedback
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jellybeana4
Quality Control Engineer
Kinda cool.
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Micus
Like hell you will Patron
Each strip I read it and I feel awkward because I can't tell where the punchline is.
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MorningSunshine
Professional
i like it (:
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Each strip I read it and I feel awkward because I can't tell where the punchline is.
This is like the most non funny comic ever.
p much the drawings are awkward, the grammar is shite, and the jokes aren't there
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hooray for rootbeer
Visionary
It didn't make me laugh. It made me cringe at the pictures and the grammar.
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not very funny or grammatically correct, but gotta respect the dude for trying to do something interesting with his time.
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Each strip I read it and I feel awkward because I can't tell where the punchline is.
This is like the most non funny comic ever.
i got the first one
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raza301
Wealthy Hobo
the jokes arent that great and the art needs to be better
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SoNiCfAN123
srsly dude Patron
ok i dont the latest one at all
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