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Replies: 5Last Post Aug. 31, 2008 2:24pm by dont fall asleep
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please let me have your honest opinions on this  


'No lying now' I said
And he said 'ok'
I said 'We loved each other didn't we?'
and he said 'yes'
I said 'We told each other everything, didn't we?'
and he said 'yes'
I said 'We spent all of our time together didn't we?'
and he said 'yes'

He walked away, his tender heart having to break mine.
An autumn leaf heads towards the pavement
as he continued
down the one-way street.
He'll look back someday

Four steps down the side of the road he looks back
I said 'she's pretty isn't she?'
And he silenced the street.
He didn't know I knew.
Another leaf floats in the air and gently touches down

'I love you' he finally dared to speak.
Liar.
Recklessness is something not permitted on a road
Through my throat I can feel bricks
Like those on the side.

'Sure' I said. Finally I walk towards the fallen leaves
on the other side of the road.
One-way remember, no going back.

This is the 'No lying' quiz, sit up.


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Hm.

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Indescribable.

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Good poem?

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Never get hung up on one girl. There are six billion people on the planet.
How could you know?

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i like it... whats the "this is the 'no lying' quiz, sit up." about i dont getthat

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don't really get the end much but i guess it is to do with all the Qs at the beginning

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