the pull of a trigger
and the drop of a pill
in the hands of a man
is the power to kill

the abuse of a child
and the house of dysfuntion
in the life of a child
is the path for corruption

EDIT: on second thought, bad death metal song was redundant.

Post edited at 11:01 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 by HXC

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Deep Thought.
Random Musing.

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sounds like lyrics to a bad death metal song.

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Basically. Sounds like something Origin would make.

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She is everything to me, that unrequited dream
That song that no one sings
The unattainable, she's a myth that I have to believe in
All I need to make it real is one more reason

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i have the full version wrote down but i dont have it with me but the whole poem has the same begining lines (the,and,in,is)but it all makes sense but plz tell me what u think of this first lil part.

the pull of a trigger  
and the drop of a pill
in the hands of a man  
is the power to kill

the abuse of a child
and the house of dysfuntion
in the life of a child  
is the path for corruption

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i think you should PM me the whole thing

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First things first; One day at a time, Keep it simple!

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sad, true, good...2 thumbs up :)

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