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i've started writing again...what do you think?
Replies: 8Last Post Aug. 4, 2008 6:42am by its only me again
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( ezacxveronica22 )


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Underneath
underneath that smile
lies a broken heart,
that is tired...so tired
of being ripped apart

Underneath the laughter,
lies hurt and pain,
the kind that time
cannot heal or tame.

Underneath the strenght you see
lies fear embedded in
the kinda you grasp tightly
and find hard to set free.

Underneath that grown body,
there is a small child still struggling to be a man
not sure of where to go
or who to be.

underneath the harshness,
lies a warm loving heart,
wanting so much to be loved
and not left behind.

ii want you to be you
let it out
let it show
for the whole world to see
release your your fears your broken dreams
bottled anxieties,
and all of your hidden tear.

(zac)


so tell me what you thing hate it or love it or even relate to it.......

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xox
veronica


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Jenintendo


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Deep man.
Deep.
*nods*

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All these memories, haunting me
Seeking control

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emily1love


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LOVE eeeet

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*♥*i know this pretty rave guy*♥*

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SavannahNoel


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I like it :)

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Think about it..How old were YOU, when you were 12?

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motorhead113


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I like it. 'Tis deep, and reminds me of a friend.

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dragonking


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It's pretty good.  It's spelled strength.  One part seemed to not sound correct so you should reword it.

Underneath the strenght you see
lies fear embedded in
the kinda you grasp tightly
and find hard to set free.

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Dragonfang93


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That was beautiful.

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SUPER SEXY CHICK


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i like it

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its only me again

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very good

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but thats just my opinion

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