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which one?
Replies: 6Last Post July 31, 2008 7:15am by Mattie17
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Choice Votes Percent  
the first one 13 50%
the last one 13 50%
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( rawr41507 )

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which one do you think is  better? & why/what do you like about it??

Chris, darlin
I havent seen your face in forever
It kills me
And I haven't heard your amazing voice in so long
I miss it like crazy
And what I really miss
October first
Everything was a huge disaster
But as I was crying
And the world went up in flames around us
Things were so perfect.
Perfect cause I was with you.
It was the perfect disaster.

-or-

I love you babe
I really do
But this distance is terrible
I miss you
and this pain is almost unbearable
But I deal with it
because you mean the world to me
And I'll admit
I'm afraid I'll never see
you ever again
And that is what keeps me up so late
every night.
I'll love you forever darling.


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Tigerhawk


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First one is better...

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SophFAIRY


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First.

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albinna


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i like the first one.

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lovemetwicetoday


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I prefer the second one

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"She lies and says she's in love with him, can't find a better man".

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paperskyx

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First....

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I am now one point closer to ranking up.

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Mattie17


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Like both. but i voted second

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