http://emdurham88.googlepages.com/home

ignore all the boring front page stuff, that was just what we had to do for a tutorial thing they gave us, click on "life  in the water" and have a little squiz around :D

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Do you want criticisms?

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only if its constructive or speicifc spelling grammar errors, cos i havent edited much so may have missed alot in that sense

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its wonderful!  
but, what age group or who is your audience?

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10 year olds, give or take

kids in the level 3 vels range, which is year 3/4

Post edited at 4:22 am on July 23, 2008 by senorita smirnoff

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Quote: from shutter bugs at 4:20 am on July 23, 2008

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its wonderful!
but, what age group or who is your audience?

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10 year olds, give or take

kids in the level 3 vels range, which is year 3/4

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ok,  thats what i thought, just wondering :)

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