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what do you think about my intro ?

Replies: 8 — Last Post July 22 6:36pm by brook

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( Luvlymii )

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im writing an essay for AP english.. and this is my intro. im open to suggestions.
In the novel Native Son written by Richard Wright readers come across various feelings toward certain characters because of the character's actions, which make those characters morally ambiguous characters. Bigger Thomas is a morally ambiguous character because even though he committed a wrong by killing, he had a personal reason behind it.

Post edited at 6:20 pm on July 22, 2008 by Luvlymii

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filo freak316

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i'd spell novel right first. haha.

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greeneyedbeauty

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Sounds ok.

Post edited at 6:20 pm on July 22, 2008 by greeneyedbeauty

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Relativity

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Repetition of "ambiguous"

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ReallyCute

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okay, i'd do more to it to pass

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Isaias Arenas

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i rlly wish i hadnt taken ap classes.. good intro though, my teacher would like it

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LostInTheClouds

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We had to read the same book for our summer assignment last year, so message me if you need help. (I had to do an essay on the ambigous factor as well.)

Honestly, I think it needs some work. Make it longer and add more details. There should be at least 3 more sentences, to touch upon what the body paragraphs will unravel.

Also, you should look up some synonyms for the word character.

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