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| i love it |
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17% |
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| it's pretty good |
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10% |
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| it's ok |
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42% |
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| i hate it |
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28% |
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( mackenzie13 )
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i wrote this when i was 12.. it seems so cliche
to write about tears,
but it's what i feel,
what i fear they pour down my face
just like a river,
they give me goosebumps
make me shiver even though it's over,
i still wish there could be us
feel all that care
all that trust i keep hoping it will be you
when i pick up the phone
but the deed is done,
the seed has been sown all that i wrote in this poem is true,
even this last line:
i love you
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Time is a great teacher, but unfortunately it kills all its
pupils. -Louis Hector Berlioz
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ashleyacid
Omnipotent One
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I hate it.
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I don't want this moment to ever end
Where everything's nothing without you
I'll wait here forever just to, to see you smile
Cause it's true, I am nothing without you
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im with stupid
Swami
 Sustainer
Support Leader
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It seems too mundane.
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I can't stand to fly
I'm not that naive
I'm just out to find
The better part of me
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hooray for rootbeer
Visionary
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i hate it.
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Lose yourself in lines dissecting.
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HXC
Enlightened One
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lame.
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Move your hands and feet. i dont even care if you dance offbeat.
when you dance on me, keep hands off please.
I dont want nobody to think im with you, i mean you seem cool
but your friend seems pretty damn cool too
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8:18 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 | Joined: Sep. 2007 | Days Active: 263
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jamesshadowwolf
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he im a guy and for a 12 year old that was pritty good. dont lisen to the others puttign you down. they probly just people who think ohh its a poem...
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dragonking
Vanguard of Socialism
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It's good for a 12 year old to have wrote.
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Dragonking: LW's Own Superhero! RIP MOM 5-30-07 :'(
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