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Will someone offer me some serious help?
Short story - Love it if you would look at it.
Replies: 3Last Post Aug. 20, 2008 5:46pm by ErnestoTheTrippyOne
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I'm writing a short story, and I don't really know what direction it's in, but would someone be willing to read it, and tell me what you think of it so far?  The part that I've written - it's not the beginning, it's going to be somewhere in the middle.

Any takers?  I would really appreciate it.

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i will if you want
im a beta on fanfiction

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yeah why not

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Hell yeah, I love reading unfinished crap and helping with it! (not sarcasm)

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