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Previous poem i wrote.
Replies: 3Last Post Aug. 19, 2008 1:15pm by Eos
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Now he has me thinking,
about the first time our eyes met.
and how the hours went by like minutes,
but the shadows never left.
now i start to realize..
that those shadows will always stay.
and as long as i still love you,
they will never go away.


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awwww thats really good and well written. i write a lot too

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I didn't love it, but it wasn't half bad.

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i liked it.
Deep man, deep.

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