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"Web design and more... (much, much more)" makes it sound like you're offering complimentary blowjobs. A rewording is in order (unless you actually are offering complimentary blowjobs).
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"Web design and more... (much, much more)" makes it sound like you're offering complimentary blowjobs. A rewording is in order (unless you actually are offering complimentary blowjobs).
LOL. But do you like it?
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but you seem to have the layout and technical stuff down
yes. I wanted a sort of professional look.
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Nice website
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Anyway, get rid of the line going up the building. The cardinal rule of web design is no sparkly shit. You don't want it looking like a 12 year old's myspace.
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but you seem to have the layout and technical stuff down
yes. I wanted a sort of professional look.
who's your target audience, big businesses?
small
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Anyway, get rid of the line going up the building. The cardinal rule of web design is no sparkly shit. You don't want it looking like a 12 year old's myspace.
True. I'll think about that. I tried not to over do it.
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smallthen why do you have a huge business skyscraper on your front page?
I don't know. It looked cool.
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