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Okay poem I wrote
what do you get from it? like what do you think its about?
Replies: 8Last Post Nov. 18, 2008 3:34pm by bananawhore
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Bloody knuckles
Forced smiles, overdone grins
Keep it coming, that happy vibe
Until tomorrow comes
But tomorrows always coming
And today is always here
And so we manage
And the voice inside your head
Louder, louder, louder
But you don't dare say a word
Critscizm is your friend
The voice will make you better
And stress pumps through your veins
Intertwined with blood and gore
And your thoughts spin endlessly
Like a child on a tire swing
Through your on the edge mind
And emotion overcomes you
close your eyes and hold onto reality
Try to keep yourself alive
Do what you have to do
Take away the pain, and you know it's all alright
And you'll force your way through
Attending a never ending masquerade for your thoughts
But at the end of the day
It all comes down to bloody knuckles.


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sounds violent....that was only from like the first two lines though

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Hope is the first step on the road to disappointment.
Burn the heretic. Kill the mutant. Purge the unclean.
Pain is an illusion of the senses; despair is an illusion of the mind.
Life is a prison, death a release.

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k14nk


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good


yet you have anger issues.

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its alright

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Its quite a dark theme.

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Life is great!

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Until tomorrow comes
But tomorrows always coming
And today is always here

Those are my favorite lines. I'm a songwriter and to me, those are the best lines right there.

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The Only Difference Between .:Medicine:.
& .:Poison:. Is In The Dose ~.~


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thanks! dont steal them
(jk) :)

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Bulimia.

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QQ more tick

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okay what if it was called blloody wrists?

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