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my newest love poem!!
a poem entitled blind love
Replies: 5Last Post Mar. 22 8:21am by sebsam
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( bordmb )


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     BLIND LOVE

when I see you my heart burns
when you talk oh how it yearns
but im scared to ask for more
for I know not what's in store
will our future be as friends
will we love until the end
ill wait for you to give a sign
until then my heart is blind

  so I want your opinion .on the poem

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heads I get tail tails I get head


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Kipzillah


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short and sweet....two thumbs up

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2:54 pm on Nov. 21, 2008 | Joined: Sep. 2008 | Days Active: 24
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boyluvr84


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what happens when ur not in love anymore?
hate poems?
fuck her poems?
stick it in ur juice box & suck it poems?

[cant wait?]

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arg,shiver me timbers


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xidus

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i like it :D 100 out of 10 :)

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Nyx28


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Punctuation would rock in this poem. The poem was good in concept,though it could've been written better.I still like the poem though.

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sebsam


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tis wickedy wooo!!! me loves it  :D Well done

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