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Teaching Retards How To Swim
Last poem for the night, I swear
Replies: 19 — Last Post Dec. 21, 2008 9:58pm by I Thought It Was You
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I Thought It Was You

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Wow... That was incredibly offensive...
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Okay then...
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Quote: from spaceykayce at 9:29 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
It doesn't even rhyme. How very disappointing.

See at least I could make it rhyme..

I tried to teach the 'mentally challenged how to swim
I wasn't ready, but he just jumped in.

Of course he didn't float, he started to sink,
I jumped in after him, no time to think

I pulled him out of the pool, and gave him CPR
And now he is the next Michael Phelps, a swimming star.

First off, most rhyming poetry blows

Second, that poem missed the whole point of this one.

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Quote: from music dude at 6:41 pm on Dec. 22, 2008
Quote: from spaceykayce at 9:29 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
It doesn't even rhyme. How very disappointing.  

 See at least I could make it rhyme..  

 I tried to teach the 'mentally challenged how to swim  
 I wasn't ready, but he just jumped in.  

 Of course he didn't float, he started to sink,  
 I jumped in after him, no time to think  

 I pulled him out of the pool, and gave him CPR  
 And now he is the next Michael Phelps, a swimming star.  

 

First off, most rhyming poetry blows

Second, that poem missed the whole point of this one.

It was better than yours though.

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I Thought It Was You

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Yeah it was!
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