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i want to write a book
Replies: 15 — Last Post Dec. 21, 2008 5:04am by GeneCosta
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Enlightened One
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i want to write a series of kids books and i want it to be about cats and dogs tat learn to read i think that i want to help kids learn to read i have been wanting to write a book since i was in the 6th grade and  i just could not sleep I'm so exited i want to if my moms boyfriend will do the art work for it but i don't know what do you think livewire

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xRagsx

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I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online.  And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.

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Ruffington Sanchez


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Just go for it man.
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Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online. And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.

Couldn't have said it better myself.

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If you want to, just do it. Enjoy!

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honeybee3333

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follow your dream
ours are actually similar

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L0VESTONED

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Already been done.

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Ruffington Sanchez


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Quote: from blufindr at 3:16 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online.  And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.

Couldn't have said it better myself.

Wow a couple of cunts right here.

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Enlightened One
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Quote: from Ruffington Sanchez at 4:38 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from blufindr at 3:16 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online. And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.
 

 Couldn't have said it better myself.

Wow a couple of cunts right here.

its ok i dont mind

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Quote: from Ruffington Sanchez at 10:38 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from blufindr at 3:16 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online. And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.
 

 Couldn't have said it better myself.

Wow a couple of cunts right here.

So you think someone who uses paragraph sentences should be teaching children how to read?

I don't have a problem with him writing a book. I do have a problem with someone who doesn't use grammar rules teaching my kids their ABCs and so forth.

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Enlightened One
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Quote: from blufindr at 4:43 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from Ruffington Sanchez at 10:38 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from blufindr at 3:16 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online.  And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.

  Couldn't have said it better myself.

 

 Wow a couple of cunts right here.

So you think someone who uses paragraph sentences should be teaching children how to read?

I don't have a problem with him writing a book. I do have a problem with someone who doesn't use grammar rules teaching my kids their ABCs and so forth.

yeah it was just a dream anyways i gess that im not that smart well not like i want to be tis stupid i have been trying for many years to understad it and i just dont get it i never have

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xRagsx

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Quote: from blufindr at 3:43 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from Ruffington Sanchez at 10:38 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from blufindr at 3:16 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online.  And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.

  Couldn't have said it better myself.

 

 Wow a couple of cunts right here.

So you think someone who uses paragraph sentences should be teaching children how to read?

I don't have a problem with him writing a book. I do have a problem with someone who doesn't use grammar rules teaching my kids their ABCs and so forth.

It's called realism. And it's nothing they wouldn't have been told by editors they submitted their book to.

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Enlightened One
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Quote: from xRagsx at 4:46 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from blufindr at 3:43 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from Ruffington Sanchez at 10:38 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from blufindr at 3:16 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from xRagsx at 10:15 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
I think it's best not to search for approval from strangers online. And I think you need to learn to punctuate before you try to write a book, much less a sentence.
   

  Couldn't have said it better myself.

  Wow a couple of cunts right here.

 

 So you think someone who uses paragraph sentences should be teaching children how to read?  

 I don't have a problem with him writing a book. I do have a problem with someone who doesn't use grammar rules teaching my kids their ABCs and so forth.

It's called realism. And it's nothing they wouldn't have been told by editors they submitted their book to.

well like i said it was just a dream i used to teach kids how to read and it was a good feeing i just like to help you know it makes me feel better

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Quote: from masterzion at 10:45 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
yeah it was just a dream anyways i gess that im not that smart well not like i want to be tis stupid i have been trying for many years to understad it and i just dont get it i never have

It's not that you're stupid. I think it's a good idea. But realistically, publishers are more likely to reject your script if it's of a lesser quality in terms of spelling and grammar.

But what the hey. Go for it if you want.

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Enlightened One
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Quote: from blufindr at 4:50 am on Dec. 21, 2008
Quote: from masterzion at 10:45 pm on Dec. 21, 2008
yeah it was just a dream anyways i gess that im not that smart well not like i want to be tis stupid i have been trying for many years to understad it and i just dont get it i never have

It's not that you're stupid. I think it's a good idea. But realistically, publishers are more likely to reject your script if it's of a lesser quality in terms of spelling and grammar.

But what the hey. Go for it if you want.

yeah well it was a dream that albert enstin helped put in my head he was my hero i wrote a 10 page essay on him i only needed 2

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