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Some of my own
Tell me what you think
Replies: 5 — Last Post Dec. 21, 2008 9:20am by noraa
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  Do You Need It?
I hear the screaming
Of all the lives taken
Does it have to be this way?
No, but that's not my decision

Why the war?
We can't have peace?
We can't stop all of this?
All of the pain and suffering

It's nothing but pointless violence
Gun shots heard every minute
Innocent dying every day
Why make war with our enemies?

Enemies are your best ally
Yet you decide to fight them?
Idiotic, pointless, violent
All characteristics of war

If it's war that you seek
Then you're gonna get it
I only have one question:
Do you really need it?

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Yours truly(:

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its good

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makingxmexsmile


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Not too shabby =]

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moehowardfan


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Not bad, my friend!

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GeneCosta


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IMO it's not that good. You're just regurgitating thoughts.

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noraa

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This poem has no point. It's well written and good, but it's just saying the same thing over and over again, and it's nothing new added to an argument.
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