god sent me an angel,
who cared for me an loved me like no other
then took him back.
i guess there must have been a mistake.
i thought it was me,
but i realized it was a learning experience.
to be careful who i love,
to let go when it's time to let go,
cause the longer you hang on the more it's goin
to hurt.
i hanged on for a long while.
i cant help but to think if he still thinks of me.
but time heals everything an everyone,
even heartbroken me.
an in time i will be on my way to beter livin.
free of any worries,
or sleepless nights only filled with tears.
cause i know there's someone
alot
better out there for me.
i cant earase


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A lot is two words

I wouldn't recommend using "even heartbroken me" just because it doesn't flow well,

Hanged is not a word, it's hung.

I like the content, I really do, just revise a bit please, for everyone's, including your own, sake.

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grammar is horrible.

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this ^

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grammar is horrible.

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awww cute..i love it!

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Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008

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awww cute..i love it!

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thank you very much
i know at least someone likes it lol
:)

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Quote: from smiileyy boo at 10:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008

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Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008

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awww cute..i love it!

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 thank you very much  
 i know at least someone likes it lol  
 :)

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I did say I liked it! I just said revise the grammar because it blows more than an inner city whore!

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whore? wtf?

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