I see thee light, You shine too brightly. Mock me by day; And taunt me nightly,
Where I do go, You follow in vain; For I feel none, But sorrow and shame.
Last year, or when? Time bares no meaning. All I do hear, Is distant screaming.
By night; I dream Of his bloodied chest. By day; consumed The guilt, too intense.
My blood runs black, Mine soul is broken. My throat pricks dry; Of words failed spoken.
I hope you like it! Any comments, etc. are much appreciated.
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thats amazing!
------- So you were born, and that was a good day Someday you'll die, and that is a shame But somewhere in the between was a life of which we all dream And nothing and no one will ever take that away
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This is really good
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noraa
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I actually really love this. I usually don't see too much poetry I like on LiveWire, but this was incredible. Keep it up!
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Thankyou so much :)
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That's great
------- It's better to feel pain than feel numb like I do.
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Thanks!
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