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Opinions please (only if you want to help)
I wrote this just letting it all out
Replies: 15 — Last Post Dec. 26, 2008 7:23pm by nicolekisses
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( nicolekisses )


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Hi my name is nicole.

I wrote this poem earlier today just letting it all out and now I need an opinion on what I should do to get help. IT used to be a habbit of mine and now I'm not sure what to do. Truthly I can see myself doing this agian, evrything in the poem came straight from my heart.

I dont care what you post really I just need domeone to talk to
So heres my poem

                           blood leaks ruby red
                    It drips down my arm and falls apon my bed
      It hurts so bad, but feels so good, it creates an erie but cool mood
       It takes away the pain before, but leaves me crying on the floor
               I crave it like a drug,But what I realy need is a hug
       To take away evrything, lift me of my burden and to give me wings
               But I have tried, all they do is feed me lies
                       I would rather cut and DIE

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Lihiro


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Hi there, nice to meet you.

Your poem sucks as a poem.

But as an expressive art it could be considered worthy to many emotional kids internationally.

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Don't stop.

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jennamae1988


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Keep on writing poems.  It will help get your emotions out in a healthy manner instead of cutting.

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"If all else perished, and he remained, I should still continue to be;
and if all else remained, and he were annihilated
the universe would turn to a mighty stranger." -Withering Heights
Jenna Mae
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carracer


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I would tell someone and if it really is an uncontrollable urge, get a psychologist.

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The world is only as sweet as you make it and only as terrible as you see it
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Xgrifgrif94X


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Thats good

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~You Just Phailed~
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Thanks ( nicole giggles a little and her mood is lightnd)
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beautifoul


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you should add this to the end of your poem
'and eat pie'
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surfrgrl

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ehmagod. that was amazing.

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i dont really care if i win... i just want you to lose
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SkAnDyBaR


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Cool it's Cool.

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Im larger than life , down there.
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plumc0la

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I understand. I'm a former cutter. Just pull through and don't let it get you again. I did it once in 8th grade, and then relapsed earlier this year. I quit now, but not a day goes by when I don't want to do it. Even on good days. It's unexplainable, but true.

Just pull through and don't let yourself get sucked into it again.

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A Storybook Love wouldn't want Anybody Else But You

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Welcome to LW



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Most people would rather be certain they're miserable, than risk being happy.

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chaosdisown


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it came straight from your heart? do you know what a heart is missy?

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I have more conversations with dialtones than i do with people.
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gnr90


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This isn't a bad start to writing. And writing is definitely better than cutting. If you find this as a good way to let your feelings out, feel free to continue. Anything that you can do to keep you from hurting your self is a really good thing. I'm willing to listen if you want, you can PM me.

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It's time to nut up or shut up!
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In Our Eyes


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It seems more prose than poem, and it's halfway decent x-D

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Life is what you make it.
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VonGuy1

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hi, i'm von

i hope you don't do that again, cut yourself

if you want to talk you can message me anytime

by the way, you're a good writer

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Ban hate and stress with Cheese and being crazy silly!

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