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my new story i dont have a title
Replies: 14Last Post Dec. 26, 2008 8:25pm by naturechild
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she bit her lip as he pushed harder on her she opened her mouth to scream but nothing came out. He pushed down harder on her she tried to push him away but she wasnt strong enough to push him away.  

Finaly he was gone she got up and walked back into the party her friend brought her to, She took out her cell and dialed 911 the sirens sounded and every one ran and stared at her. now she was alone, cold and scared.


this is what i have so far idk what do u think?

Post edited at 8:16 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 by coughcough

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That's not cool.

At all.

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um, how 'bout RAPE?

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You should make it more descriptive.

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police came pretty quick.

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A bit short for a story.

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drowningfish


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that should be like a PSA
dangers of partying or somehting like thhat

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that's a story?

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Thats it? lame.

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umm yeah, im gonna leave this topic now.

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you said push too many times. find other words.

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Will there be a second book?

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why the FUCK would you post that?

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Wow that wasn't very vivid at all. I couldn't apint a picture. I'mno JK but hell you gotta workharder than that! I wanna be a writer myself. And how about  The Defamation of Innocence.

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naturechild


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sounds like a rip off of speak. the book? yeah it's been done before. start something not so...depressing. happy stories!

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