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My Baybee
poem i wrote for this girl
Replies: 6Last Post Dec. 26, 2008 7:54pm by ToodleWoodles
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I wrote this for a girl and i was wondering if she'd like it so give opinions.

We started a group
started a pact made for only 2
no one would stop us
as long as i had you

We talked for hours
being as ridiculous as it seemed
but i started to feel something
something only talked about in dreams

I always loved you
but there seemed to be more
but i never understood
why i was feeling this for.

Because you weren't looking
you didnt want to be hurt
didnt want a broken heart
or a guy whose only a flirt

I could tell by your words'
you wanted something with meaning
something worth fighting for
worth keeping and redeeming

I won't push you
into something you dont want
but baybee you got me wishing it was me
because i know your different not a flirtacious flaunt

I look at you differently
more than just a friend
wanting you to be more
would you be willing to take my hand?

I try so hard
everyday just to look away
but its unbearable
with you theres never a day that turns gray

No matter how hard you always try
to look the best you always amaze me
because no matter what
your always my beautiful baybee =]

I know there are times
where i try to be your guy
sometimes theres not
but your the angel that allows me to fly

i'd give the world to you
show you im not just another guy
be there when you need me
or when you need to cry

The only one i think of
when i wake up
or go to bed
seems i can never get enough

I'll love you
until the end of time
then i can look and say
sorry fella's this angels mine

If it seems
like its just too much
its ok i can wait
doesn't mean we have to rush

i just hope when the time does come
and you started showing signs
that i wont be outside looking in
that i'll be on your mind.

Because your always on mine.
The girl who seems perfect for me
but if it happens
you know exactly where ill be

Dont allow this
to make you look at me differently
because it's still always me
one who helped create MESAP just like you certainly

I really do love you
just wanting you to know'
but ill wait
and let time just flow

Because i know we'll have each other
no matter when times get tough
you'll always have me and i'll have you
be there when times just get rough

i trust you
more than anyone i know
i guess thats a reason
why i love you so...

But i hope you think of me
as a guy for you
because no matter what
i'll always love you =]

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http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=18570232


7:49 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 | Joined: Mar. 2005 | Days Active: 559
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Miss Vanity


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Awww that's cute

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We'll do some drugs and fall in love,
and get f*cked up while the world just shrugs,
with no thought logically, we're wondering the streets so aimlessly...

7:51 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 | Joined: Nov. 2008 | Days Active: 64
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matto


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if you move the y and replace one letter with an x, it spells the street i'm living on

:P

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Twilight is upon me, and soon, night must fall.
That is the way of things. The way of the Force."
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surfrgrl

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oh my god. that was freaking beautiful.

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i dont really care if i win... i just want you to lose

7:51 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 | Joined: Nov. 2008 | Days Active: 81
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Thank you everyone whose responded to this i just really hope she likes it like everyone here has so far =]

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http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=18570232

7:53 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 | Joined: Mar. 2005 | Days Active: 559
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Lothar1


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its very good there are some words i would change but its not bigge just really long lol

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ToodleWoodles


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i cried. lol its beautiful, she'll love it.

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I love Fall Out Boy-Hayden Cristensen is hot!

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