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Concrete Angel
Replies: 4Last Post Jan. 5 6:50pm by Mikayla007
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Concrete Angel
An Angel of concrete living in a court yard of stone
An angel with a heart belonging to one alone
In love with a human as beautiful as can be
Sorrow always in her eyes so plain for him to see
She comes to him the Angel of concrete
They need each other to be complete
Sad for she can only be his when she dies
Sad for the angel for all he can do is wait
He is destined to see her die, and he will continue to cry
In the end the tale finishes now with the two angels in the sky
Their love God has allowed

this poem  is insipred  by the song Concrete Angel

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why a concrete angel?

i didnt know angels got hard


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I love that song, it is so incredibly sad. But it's eye opening to Child Abuse. Martina McBride's best song...

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Quote: from Joke at 9:30 pm on Jan. 5, 2009

why a concrete angel?

i didnt know angels got hard


Clever, eh?

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I guess

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