Please comment, and be honest, i don't mind criticism.
when i close my eyes storm clouds swirl a roar of thunder rumbles from my gut and my heart feels as if lightning struck how do i escape this world escape the pain that everyday brings the pain i have brought on myself by choices ive made there is no way out i see but i can be numb free myself for a day or two let myself crash and burn once again knowing i may not have the strength to stop myself knowing that nobody will catch me when i fall nobody to hold me tight whisper in my ear "everything will be alright, my dear" nobody to love me for who i am to help me take the right path so that i can make the choices of who i am and who i can, with time, be
------- life . . . . . . . . . sucks.
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Jman19
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Pretty good.. would be better if you used punctuation and proper grammar.
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Elisee
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Its really good! I likee it
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Pretty good.. would be better if you used punctuation and proper grammar.
mehh, too tired right now
lol. Fair enough.
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CuntFace
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emo but i guess thats what you were shooting for, so yea its good
------- Im not an artist im a f*cking work of art
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