Okay here goes, it's not finished but I'd appreciate it if I got some advice on it. Help me to lay it down at your feet
all my sorrows and tears and incompletes
help me to find the light
don't let me go, please hold on tight
let me know that I need you
show me all there's for me to do
and if I temporary stray away
please teach me your perfect way
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