They're actually lyrics, but whatever. Rate them. Tell me if they're shitty or not. If enough people think they're not shitty, I might put them to music and such for people to hear. (Note: I know it's set up sort of weird in that there's not really a true chorus. I wanted it symmetrical so that the song has an actual center, if that makes sense. Right now it's ABABCDB, and then backwards from there. But I might change it at a later time so that it repeats instead of going backwards, and then add another B verse at the end. Most of you probably have no idea what I just said.)
Anon. for protection of self in case this completely sucks
Where were you when I was lost
And when I was finally found?
You stayed away at any cost
And I couldn't find solid ground
Breathe me in,
But don't take my hand
I'll let go.
You would know.
There comes a day we all must pay
For all the wrongs we've done
And I'm not sure, but I think yours
Are too much for anyone
Break me up
But don't write me off
'Cause you can bet
I'm not done yet
Will you ever see?
You just can't keep up with me
I tried to tell you once before
But you keep coming back for more
Never will I wander
Never will I roam
No more going under
I'll walk these roads alone
Take me away
But don't think I'll stay
I'm not yours
Anymore
I will let you wander
I will let you roam
You'll be torn asunder
You'll be on your own
Will you ever see?
You just can't keep up with me
I tried to tell you once before
But you keep coming back for more
Beg me, please
Just get on your knees
I'll take you back
But I'll leave you just as fast
Where will I be when you are lost
When you are finally found?
Will I care, will I be there?
Will I make a single sound?
Scream for me
Then just let me be
I'll forsake
Anyway
If you need me, you know where I'll be
Just as close as I need to get
To hear you cry, to hear you lie
I still don't miss you yet