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My first poem in ages!
Replies: 5 — Last Post Dec. 30, 2008 7:03am by blacksash7022
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( gapperdan )

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OK, so I haven't written any poetry for over 2 years now... and sat down earlier on and wrote this.
I know it's not the best... but... comments?


Who Is Me?

Come and see what I can.
When you are here, in this exact spot,
You can see and hear all that I can.
Your experiences may be like those I have,
Yet you and I are not the same.

These are the words I tell my future self,
The person that I will become.
Even if he were to travel on a time machine,
Back to the Then that is Right Now,
I am not my future self, and he is not me.

We may have continuously shared
The same time-space since forever,
But the two of us are not the same.
I will become you, but I am not you,
You were once me, but you are me no longer.


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Pretty good

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thats good :)

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I like it.

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Cheers guys!

I know it's a bit philosophical and deep... but it was the first thing that came into my head.

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Not bad I kind of like the approximate rhyme

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