For everything we know, we were wrong. Pull figures close, crush the bones, and make wishes on the charred ashes Of those we know... and loveD
The sun hasn't gone away You can't miss what you never knew Through the cracks in the walls and the glass It was the dying light of your fading conscience
So one more night Pull me close Pretend that he's not home This love is a gas And your cigarette is already lit So hand me that lighter And we'll take off tonight, through burning passion and thick clouds we call desire.
We have no sense of right and wrong The cross is just a fashion statement these days We shouldn't feel badly that we are not abiding by the rules of Jesus
So come with me and take my hand We'll dance in the blood puddles of old loves And share the blame As we end this razor blade masquerade Gashes not paper cuts So much for love...
------- Love is a privilege not a right.
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not gonna lie i didn't read it
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this is too long to read
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I loved it :)
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Quote: from sharpiemarker at 5:55 pm on Dec. 30, 2008Quote: from XTCofGOLD at 5:53 pm on Dec. 30, 2008not gonna lie i didn't read it
Um, 3?[/quote
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poor topic creator
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wow. i liked it it was simply amazing. <3
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I'm sorry to form a rude interlude - but why the fuck do people respond to threads saying they won't exert fourth-grade learning skills? Either respond to the poem, or don't.
As for the poem, I like the imagery, but it smacks of teenage pretentiousness - it's Sylvia Plath without any order.
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Quote: from GeneCosta at 11:36 pm on Dec. 30, 2008
I'm sorry to form a rude interlude - but why the fuck do people respond to threads saying they won't exert fourth-grade learning skills? Either respond to the poem, or don't.
As for the poem, I like the imagery, but it smacks of teenage pretentiousness - it's Silvia Plath without any order.
It is an exageration of teenage life? And thanks for introducing me to an amazing author xD
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