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( xobeautifulgirlox )
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People really like my writings. Which is really great for a writer. But what makes me very happy and proud, is when people say that I made them cry, or they felt great emotions because of the words I had written. It really means a lot, when someone tells me, that my writing bought tears to their eyes, and bought all their emtions that they have been keeping inside to come out. Also, making someone smile, and happy because of my writing makes me very happy too. As a writer, if you are, do you experience this, and how do you feel when your words were able to make people think and react accordingly.
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LOLOLOLOL, prepare to have no money
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words are beautiful things.
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1:40 pm on Jan. 2, 2009 | Joined: Mar. 2005 | Days Active: 1,392
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( xobeautifulgirlox )
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I'm not a professional writer, I just write, because I love to, and people like my writings. But I never had something published though.
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Emotions can be difficult things to evoke. It takes a great write to bring them out in a satisfying way
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Quote: from xobeautifulgirlox at 1:46 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
 Quote: from bri872002 at 2:44 pm on Jan. 2, 2009
No offense, but I don't think I could make it through your writing (although I am just basing this off of your sentence structure and punctuation in this post... it was nearly painful to even read through to see what you were talking about.) That being said, it's great that you can bring out emotions to others. 
I may not be excellent in punctuation, and spelling, but I can defiantly express how I feel, in a way where people can understand and have a lasting impression on them. As I said, I am not a professional writer. As with any thing however, no one is perfect.
Your comma abuse is jarring.
punctuation, and spelling
There should be no pause here, for example. Work on this and your writing will be at least readable.
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( xobeautifulgirlox )
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Dones't matter to me. I am not a professional writer. English isn't my native tongue.
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