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Soemthing i wrote for a girl
Replies: 6Last Post Jan. 1 8:11am by Neilap
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Then it all went to hell before i even got her, dont bash me on grammar Lol plz.

i will always realise your the only girl iv ever wanted
each time i look into your beautiful eyes
hear your soothing voice
or feel the softness of your skin


i will always know you are the one for me


i hope and pray every day
that i will always be in your heart
your mind and your dreams as you are in mine


dreams of love and happiness
that i will always wish to come true


to express this feeling i have for you
no words will ever beable to explain
only the hugs and kisses i give you
and the time i spend with you can compair
to how i truly feel for you

and as i say this,
i am on my knee's pleading that someday
i will have the chance
to truly show you how i feel
to show you the loving care
youv always deserved
from a guy such as me

and the day i finally have you
i will be the luckiest man there could ever be
to have such a girl as you
in this world of hellish disapointment

You will always be my silver lined cloud
giving me hope for the days to come
that you will always be mine

as i will always love you

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Gravewatcher is the BEST girlfriend ANY PHLUCKING
GUY could ever ask for or want. MHM! And i loves her greatly :D


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sounds too desperate

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Do not let her see that.

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Quote: from moatilliata at 11:07 am on Jan. 1, 2009

sounds too desperate

It wasnt intended to be i just wrote it for her, a girl i liked for about 3 years i rly wanted... but it was just meant to be sweet, if i was too desperate i wouldnt care i lost her last night XD

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Quote: from moatilliata at 11:07 am on Jan. 1, 2009

sounds too desperate

no not at all =] if a guy wrote me something like this that would be awesome

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Very nice yes you were right there are few mistakes but that is ok we won't talk baout that right now hehe but that is really good now memorize it and then recite it to her ... and then you can make things all better.

Remember: there is always a way for love.

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Quote: from blacksash7022 at 11:10 am on Jan. 1, 2009

Very nice yes you were right there are few mistakes but that is ok we won't talk baout that right now hehe but that is really good now memorize it and then recite it to her ... and then you can make things all better.

Remember: there is always a way for love.


lol i wish... i dunno somehow.. i rly pissed her off last night over me... acting stupid cause of a video on youtube and she tought i was rly fucked up,

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