Do you remember me? I'm just a shadow now This is where I use to be Right here beside you Holding your hand until you slipped away You and I faded away Lost in a dream of what used to be But dreams aren't real I used to feel your velvet skin I used to touch you scarlet hair Feel your soft lips Listen to your husky voice Beckoning me to come closer to you I used to fit in your strong arms but that is no more You shut me out and locked the door My sprit anchored to the ground when it once soared Tears over whelming me You said you loved me but you'll never be the same You lied to my face Your love disappeared without a trace This love cannot be an eased I'll win the race To find my place in your arms again
------- If you give a damn, take me baby or leave me
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I saw the title an immediately thought of the Hellogoodbye song. Anyway, the 5th and 6th line both ending in "away" makes it sound redundant, as does the overuse of the word "you" in lines 13-19. Actually "you" is scattered rather liberally throughout, which is annoying. Some of the rhymes seem too forced.
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