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I found an old poem of mine....
Replies: 10Last Post Dec. 29, 2008 9:33pm by mvmassacre
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9:27 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
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I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.

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All you need is love

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That sounds so similar to something I would right and I enjoyed it quite a bit.

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Quote: from Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.

I think that I meat difficult to be used correctly.


9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
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Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.

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Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.

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Quote: from alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.

That's another reason I am surprised that I wrote it.
Because I don't actual believe that it is central to lust and intimacy.



9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
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I really liked that =)

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Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.

Thanks for the advice captain obvious.

I said it was an old poem I found.
I usually hate writing love poetry because I think that it is artificial.

I usually write about various things.


9:32 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
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I like it.

It's really good!

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